Story
You start as a young female thief by the name of Krysta living in the city of Exo-Terra (means: outer terra). Video: [You are caught stealing some food and banished because you have been warned many times before. You are picked up by a band of rouges and wander through the world to places you never heard of. One day you wake up and find this hunter has slayed all of the rouges and is trying to catch you.] *You run to the city you are near and find out you are at Exo-Terra, you must find Grishen, your old friend while trying to avoid cops and keeping away from the hunter. * Once you find him the hunter catches you and you find out that he is your uncle, that has been searching for you for the last 12 years. You want some proof that he is your blood, so he shows you a mark above his ear, the exact mark that is on Krysta.

After the death of you father your uncle begins his search for you. Shortly after your uncle leaves on his quest to find you, your aunt, grandpa, and cosine were all murdered. The raiders were using you on the orders of the lord to try to take over Terra, the other super power of Prisa. You find out there are immense powers inside you that your uncle slowly helps you use with the help of crystals called Shadow Stones. You must avenge your family and stop lord Yarnith from destroying the world by abstracting the core mineral (A mineral found at the core of Prisa, that has immense powers and use). After you finally stop Yarnith from destroying the planet, an alien race has come to the planet after detecting the shift of some of the minerals. You must try to stop or destroy them.

The game takes place in a fantasy world with gadgets, vehicles and weapons pass our own technology.

Ideas
A clock that is a bit faster than a regular clock (8 hours are 12 for us), so when it is night it is actually is dark outside. Like Final Fantasy 7 with lots of fun stuff to do, were you don't have to play the game to have fun, but with more stuff (like playing a doom like game in the game or the battle arena in xenogears). Although flight is cool there should be only ground vehicles (unless you want to do a side quest to get a flying vehicle) that is used like 3D GTA in the wilderness, were you get much closer in when you get out of the vehicle.

BATTLE SYSTEM
Move your character around like Tomb Raider pressing R2 to bring down a magic and attack menu (for the different magic and attacks you may use). R1 to run or move to your right. L1 to move or run to your left. L2 to bring down a menu for supporting characters and orders to give them or to change your character. The triangle will be to jump, The square will be to Attack, the X will be to crouch, and O to use magic. When ever you bring down a menu with the R2 or L2 the game pauses.

Note: the idea of the game was using the PSX controller, but it would be best for something like X-Box or another system that might be coming out.

Name
Adam G. Jedrzejczak

Not sure how to comment this idea. The setting you present; "a fantasy world with gadgets, vehicles and weapons pass our own technology" is not very original. You only give a brief description of the story, not how it's going to develop or where it's going to end. Moreover, I don't find the battle system, or the idea of "small games" hidden in the game, very uniqe. Still, this could be a very good game, if it's done right. It's just hard to imagine how you see the game all in all.

Idea Reviewer:
-Ander Skrede-

Mark Of Dine RPG - Move your character around like Tomb Raider pressing R2 to bring down a magic and attack menu